idea:
children要會competite:
1.现在是竞争社会.....2.竞争是生存的方法....3.塑造顽强性格,可以直面困难和人生
co-operate:
1.社会是个大家庭.....2.举例比赛需要协作精神....3.互补
最后show你的观点倾向
范文:
Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth, let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that children intellect is not enough capable to analyze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.
Another reason is that if children work together, they could easily find out and supply their gaps. Because of limit of age, in order to childrens knowledge is limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.
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