我们可以看到,使用了lie in, exclude, do harm to以后,句子更有色彩了。
2、避免使用反问句、设问句。特别是作者也没有答案的问题。
例如:Whats the objective of the information? Is it to make people more confused and astray? I partly agree with the authors contention that the enormous and otiose information sometimes render people lose their way and fail to consider question penetratingly and originally.
在作文的开头就扔出两个问题,然后接下来的陈述却与问题基本毫无干系。作为读者,首先要考虑那两个问题的答案到底是什么,然后才能往下读。这些在中文里可能会被评作引人入胜的好词好句,在英语的论文写作里面,可以说是最大的败笔之一。如果你一定要问问题的话,那就改成陈述句式,例如:Whether this issue is right or wrong? 可以改成:It has been a controversial issue that.....
3、尽量避免重复使用单词或者词组。特别是近距离集中在某一两句话里使用
例如:The author argues that to understand ones own culture , one must know about at least one another culture which is distinctly different from ones own culture .While as I am concerned, I cant agree with the authors assertion.
这一个开头,总共两行字,却连续出现了4个One,3个culture。如果你把这段话大声朗读一下,就会觉得别扭、好笑了。连续使用相同的单词或者词组,体现的是作者词汇量匮乏,写作风格较差,遣词造句能力不强。给读者的感觉就是昏昏欲睡。
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