第三件事情是陈述自己的观点。这里需要涵盖下文所出现的所有论点。如果某个论点没有被包含在内,那么会给读者surprise,这在学术写作里面是很不好的。当然将全文的观点浓缩在1-2句话里是非常困难的。
例如这个题目
Educations should find out what students want included in thecurriculum and then offer it to them.
观点可以用两句话说明
Although personal interests can serve as motivationfor students to learn better (观点1), its unreasonable for educators to incorporate all the different interestsin any curriculum(观点2). Moreover, educations should shape the interests of students and helpthem acquire useful techniques and knowledge (观点3).
或者这个题目
It is the artist, not the critic, whogives society something of lasting value.
观点可以用一句话说明
Although I admit that the virtue of the artlies in the work itself , we should not overlook critics role in discovering, evaluating,and disseminating the work of artists (观点2)and how theyhelp popularize the arts value in the society (观点3).
最后还有几点注意事项
1. 开头的长度:也许你觉得有很多话可以说,也许你想把开头写得引人入胜,但开头的长度是需要控制的。如果有3个观点段,那么开头大致不应该超过全文的1/5。因为如果你的开头过长,那么会显得头重脚轻,或者显得文中的论述不够充分。
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