比如大家在写历史相关主题的文章的时候,都会写历史的真正作用是什么?那这时候,按照上面的原则,我们永远不要写一次一个样,也拒绝差不多就行的态度,我们要做的事情:就是精炼语句,把这句一定会写到的句子做到最好,然后背下,到了考场上一写就是点睛之笔,当时小西就是这么写的:
History is an elder who keep telling many vivid stories about humanity to hone the sense of pride, dignity and self-worth while promoting the thoughts about values, humanity and morality. In my view, the genuine purpose of study on history is rooted not in reconstructing the past completely and accurately by the mere sifting of evidence for facts but rather delivering the eternal values and humanity which can illustrate the present as a light and bend the arc of future toward the hope of a better day.
具体如何精炼和提升句子,小西会在后面倾囊相授,不用着急,这边是重点,一定要领会精神,很多小西的战友就是当初没弄明白,走了很多很多弯路,费了力还得不到高分。我们面对同一种话题我们的观点、思想、逻辑得一样,我们面对同一个观点和思想我们的语言和辞藻得一样。如果同一个意思,你写出了两个版本,那么你就是失败者,小西没开玩笑,我们就是要事先准备,然后重复熟悉,考场应用,拿到高分!
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