The author does not differentiate the severity of injuries.
We need to know how about the injury-rate of those young players compared with children who do not participate in these games.
We do not know the rate of injuries before children participated in these games, thus could not evaluate if the situation are getting worse.
The players in the recent study might not be representative of all young players.
The young players at Parkville may not necessarily also suffer psychological pressure as the players do in those major cities.
The author unfairly assumes that children would use the time for academic activities if they did not take part in those games.
No information about the academic performance of the children who participated in youth-leagues is provided, thus we could not judge if we need to discontinue athletic competition to guarantee more academic activities for these students.
The fact that many children were injured in softball and soccer games does not indicate that we should discontinue all other athletic competitions.
The author fails to consider the positive effects of athletic competition.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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