The number of people who purchased advance tickets does not necessarily indicate the actual attendance at the concerts.
The author fails to convince us that the lack of community support is the reason for the decline in the sales of advance tickets.
The author fails to rule out the possibility that many other people did not attend the concert because of the weather.
The author unfairly assumes that it is the choice of music is responsible for the lack of community support.
Granted that it is necessary to change the music featured on the concert, we cannot assess if the organizers should provide more modern music.
The fact that Richerts recordings are popular in music stores does not indicate that his music will also be preferred on the concert. Perhaps his music is not suitable for live performance, or perhaps people who purchase recordings are not the same group that would attend live concerts, or many people would not go to the concert just because they already have too many Richerts recordings.
The author unfairly assumes that the proposed actions are both necessary and sufficient to increase advance ticket purchases and attendance at the concerts.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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