For one thing, it has become a very fun item, the computers have become more than just work related technological tools.

　　The amount of human interaction is limited, because people in general are spending much of their leisure time doing solo on the computer.

　　In the past, it was common for the new young exectutive to get a membership to the exercise club as a perk, where he could socialize with the upper crust.

　　Now the new young exec. gets a car phone or a portable fax, so that he can work from whereever he is, usually doing that solo trip to somewhere.

　　Given these as examples, I would tend to agree with the statement that lonliness has increased as a direct result.

　　评价

　　This response is limited in both its analysis of the issue and its control of language.

　　The writer clearly expresses the idea that the technological tools we as a society have developed are not in themselves positive or negative.

　　However, the essay provides only limited support for the position; the two examples are loosely connected and undeveloped.

　　At times the organization of the essay makes for confusing reading.

　　For example, the relevance of the young executive example is not clear because there is no transition from the preceding example of the computer.

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