gre issue 官方范文(一)_GRE写作

gre issue 官方范文(一)

　　Furthermore, the list of technological advancements does not support or clarify the writers already tenuously held position.

　　Each new sentence could serve as a springboard to a thoughtful analysis but instead takes the response further from the apparent premise.

　　While the essay exhibits a lack of sentence variety and contains some grammatical errors, the language is for the most part controlled.

　　This response did not receive a score of 2 because of a language problem, but because reasoning, analysis, and development are extremely thin and insubstantial.

　　1、This statement is stating. The more advance in tecnology that society becomes, the more we depend on technology to live our everyday lives.

　　Society as a whole will out do daily tasks and depend more on machines and computers to accomplish those tasks for them. For example; I was told that the younger generations use caclators in classes on a everday level. We counldnt do that. We had to resolve a problem on our own.Because caculators are being used, math problems are being adjusted around the caculators. If I didnt know how to use a caculator today then I most likely woulndt know how to attempt to tackle the math of today.

　　Computers of today are another example. Writing a essay took a lot of thought and hard work in past. Today, I can type some words in the computer and that computer will spell, make grammer correction, and dictate a right form to use in my essay. In the past we had to all these things on our own. Im not putting down modern technology totally. I just want to state that if we take away peoples ability to think then we will slowly loose our ability to function with out modern technology.