It is a machine, although there is a person on the other end, you are still reciting your order to a machine.

　　If it is ten oclock at night and you need money, there are ATMs.

　　All of these gadgets may be very nice and convient, but they result in lack of human contact.

　　Although it might be easy to blame technolgy for our feelings of loneliness, it is just a cop out.

　　By looking at all the ways technology causes isolation, it is still people who choose to use these convenient methods.

　　If a person wants to have human contact, all they have to do is go inside to the bank or go inside the resturaunt to order.

　　What it basically boils down to, is that it is our choice whether or not we use technology.

　　It is a scary thought to think maybe one day we might live in a society where you will never have to leave your house.

　　That by using FAX machines, computers, modems, and the telephone a person would never have to have human contact to get their job done.

　　The thing is that if that is not what we as a society wants, we are the ones to speak out and change the outcome.

　　评价

　　This response presents a competent discussion of the issue.

　　The position presented in the first paragraph -- that there are many ways that society has used the advanced technology in order to isolate themselves -- is adequately sustained, but the examples given are not always clearly relevant

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