If we do not this huge, living planet will eventually become a lifeless hunk of rock floating in the large universe.
There are many ways that we can begin to work on these problems.
First decrease the amount of CFC production and usage.
Second save the rain forests, which are being cut down to make farmland that is not properly maintained.
In a few years this farmland becomes infertile and more land is needed; thus more of the rain forest is destroyed. Educating farmers on different crops that will replentish the soil and keep it fertile.
Third develop alterative methods of power other than fossil fuels, such as more hydro-electric,solar,and wind generated.
The increasing population is going to require more food production as well as other needs.
We need to be willing and able to manage our resources to meet these needs.
If we work together we can accomplish the things that are necessary to protect the Earth and our future on it.
评价
This essay presents a clear position on the issue but is limited in its development.
The author first argues that everyone needs to cooperate to solve environmental problems and then lists the ways in which we can begin to work on these problems: lowering CFCs, saving rain forests, developing alternative energy sources, and increasing food production. Although the proposed solutions are clearly relevant, they are not sufficiently explained, nor is the topics claim about the challenges of international cooperation adequately addressed.
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