The skillful use of a quotation from a business person vividly illustrates the economic impact of pollution controls.
The last two paragraphs bring a sense of closure to the essay by continuing the theme announced in the first paragraph -- that cooperation must wait until more dire circumstances produce the political will necessary to reduce pollution.
The essay exhibits superior control of grammar and syntax, with only minor errors.
Transitional phrases -- because, however, for instance -- help guide the reader through the argument.
Also, effective sentence variety and the use of precise word choice help confirm the score of 6.
At no other time then in our present time has the need for unity and togetherness been more necessary to the inhabitants on our planet.
For many decades the motto has been one of waste and denial.
The world is in a race - racing to become number one - racing to destroy the earth.
Traditions of protecting the earth have been abandoned as the need to satisfy infantile needs and desires wins out over the more philosophical desires of thought and meaning.
Unfortunately many do not see the need for reforms in actions and thought; people are living for today and not tomorrow.
Those that can believe in a future, and exhibit a desire to make a difference in this future must find a way to influence the remaining masses, and often it seems that the world simply refused to listen or learn from its past mistakes.
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