gre issue 官方范文(三)_GRE写作

gre issue 官方范文(三)

　　It is frightening to think that this is what it will to take to make most people realize that actions must be taken to clean up our earth.

　　It seems that we will only be able to come together when there is not other alternative.

　　Perhaps the must unfathomable thought is, what happens if people do not unite together now to protect our environment.

　　It can only seem that we will once again be threatened with war as we fight each other to death over the last precious miles of land and food.

　　Civilization will have come full circle; all of our technological and scientific advances will mean nothing if the earth is destroyed and mankind subsequently wiped out with it

　　评价

　　This is a generally well-developed essay that examines the complexities of the issue and demonstrates good control of the elements of effective writing.

　　The writer strongly agrees with the topics claim and uses the first paragraph to expand on the idea that environmental problems imperil the earth.

　　These problems, according to the writer, derive from peoples lack of maturity and lack of foresight

　　The third paragraph provides a highly relevant example of the complexities involved in the issue, showing how damage to the rainforest can be attributed both to poverty in Latin America and to the voracious appetite of the wealthy North American consumer society.