From here the writer returns to the focus on planning for tomorrow and proposes a specific remedy
The essay closes with a passionate description of a negative scenario for the future.
The response is well organized but, unlike a 6 essay, does not sustain a tight focus.
Although the example of the rain forest degradation is highly relevant and fully developed, many of the reasons and assertions receive only cursory development or explanation .
The sentence structure in the essay is often nicely varied , but it is at times choppy
The vocabulary is generally well chosen, with words such as depletion, unfathomable, and subsequently.
However, the phrasing is at times imprecise, as in these examples: We are only a small percentage,and At no other time then in our present time has the need??? been more necessary????
Our declining environment may bring the people of the world together as no politician, philosopher, or war ever could.
Environmental issues are a growing concern in our country today.
It is an issue that concerns every person, no one is excluded.
Facing and solving environmental issues calls for unity and cooperation.
Prejudices should be put aside in this time of need.
Without unity our world as we know it will not exist in twenty-five years.
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