We must all take the water issue seriously, better understand the link to food security and stop the trend towards overuse of freshwater. The decisions of the coming years will determine whether a major global crisis of water and food shortage can be avoided.
这篇长但是不难,我觉着亮点是中间的论述部分~很值得AW学习~
总体上是是什么,为社么,怎么办
在为社么中的论证尤其精彩~
基本思路是:提出问题举例说明反例对比问题发展引出更进一步的核心问题
感觉步步逼近,很好地呈现出biofeul加重水资源匮乏的可能,最终达到呼吁减少对biofeul的投入的目的,非常有说服力!
而且在最后的怎么办中,作者也考虑的相当全面
这篇的写作思路太赞了!
素材:事物的两面性
摹写:
1、What is meant to conceal the pain in ones heart is making even more inner worry brighter
2、If therere more people concentrate on the issue,and if we join hands to do something,the amelioration of environmental problems will follow.
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