In sum, the phenomenon of the treatments to these gifted children is such a controversial one that certainly some of us, of course, might still cast some doubt on my analysis, but at least what I discussed above to some degree shake the adamantly held reverse belief, which is one of my main purposes writing such a frank issue. The other one is something nave that I hope more and more experts should excise to discern the talented ones and emancipate them out of the tragic drop, just BECause every one should share the same sense that they are no doubt the unique resources the God bestowed to us and once missed no measure can be compensated for the huge loss, left only silent cries.
评析:范文采用故做深沉的开头方式,从社会上某些专家的争议引出话题,并在首段末作出明确回应,从而确保切题,值得考生引以为鉴。紧接着作者按上述三段论模式一一就理由、后果与问题采取不同方式的论证来实现,从而使文章在结构上呈现出多元化和周到性,给阅卷人一种坚不可摧的震慑力,保证了论证的严密和条理。同时,本文的因果论证和事例论证也是堪称一绝的,读者可以反复体会一下如何实现多方位,多角度的论证手段来加固自己的长城。
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