Original: Because a young man usually is more open-minded and has less restriction in practicing their own believes:
Revised: Young people are usually more open-minded and less inhibited about expressing their beliefs:
Original: One thing under the same situation, two person will give you disparage descriptions, for they are from different angles and have different perspectives.
Revised: Two people, finding themselves in the same situation, will describe it in different ways, for they look at the circumstances from alternative angles and have disparate perspectives.
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