In sum, whether we are building computer networks, government agencies, or personal lifestyles, great effort and courage are required to make things simple, or to keep them that way. Moreover, because humans naturally tend to make things big and complex, it arguably requires more effort and courage to move in the opposite direction. In the final analysis,making things simpleor keeping them that waytakes a brand of effort born of reflection and restraint rather than sheer exertion, and a courage character and conviction rather than unbridled ambition.
最后这两段个人认为是整篇文章的精华了,因为无论从思想还是从语言都是精品了。我们常听到一些g友痛苦的呼声:天啊!我们这些non-native speakers什么时候才能练成像这些人一样能够I think in English, therefore I write in English.毕竟,我们十几年甚至几十年来都是在非英语环境中成长,gre作文简直是在挑战我们的极限了在短短数月之间就要写出一篇super professional, and super insightful的文章来。但是,我们有想过吗?既然现在时间那么紧迫,想一步登天是不大可能的情况下,为何不能边用中文思索societal phenomena,边狂练英语句法,虽然作出来的成品会有点别扭,但好过一直停留在托福的水平上呀。另外,我们不要忘记,做了gre的阅读后,我们的阅读和理解能力已大大提高了,我们的思维方式也必将有所转变,而这些都是对我们准备作文很有帮助的。因此,我强烈建议:1.多看多读有gre风味的句子,无论多么晦涩都要好好琢磨个中含意;2.坚持发掘对你有用的社会现象,联系实际,模仿gre的思维方式,大胆brainstorm,提出自己的见解,与其他人一起探讨问题,将会受益匪浅。
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