GRE作文点评：思路清晰和论据有力_GRE写作

GRE作文点评：思路清晰和论据有力

　　这篇文章的精彩之处莫过于层出的复扎句和排山倒海似的并列句和排比句了。大家千万别给这个作者对于 anthropology astronomy的高深见解吓倒，我觉得他肯定是考古或天文专业的。因此，我们也可仿效一下，举些符合自己熟悉的专业背景的知识，因为BT的ets们就喜欢这种味儿。

　　An even more striking example of how expertise in diverse fields is needed to advance knowledge involves the area of astronomy and space exploration. Significant advancements in our knowledge of the solar system and the universe require increasingly keen tools for observation and measurement. Telescope technology and the measurement of celestial distances, masses, volumes, and so forth, are the domain of astrophysicists. These advances also require increasingly sophisticated means of exploration. Manned and unmanned exploratory probes are designed by mechanical, electrical, and computer engineers. And to build and enable these technologies requires the acumen and savvy of business leaders, managers, and politicians. Even diplomats might play a roleinsofar as major space projects require international cooperative efforts among the worlds scientists and governments. And ultimately it is our philosophers whose expertise helps provide meaning to what we learn about our universe.