实例讲解新gre作文官方范文_GRE写作

实例讲解新gre作文官方范文

　　8、高分作文的攻击顺序：You might want to organize your critique around the organization of the argument itself, discussing the argument line by line. Or you might want to first point out a central questionable assumption and then move on to discuss related flaws in the arguments line of reasoning.这里给出了两种攻击顺序，根据我读了一个多月awintro的经验来看，一般官方给出的建议总是越靠后的越好越nb，正如在官方推荐issue观点的时候总是把平衡观点放在最后。所以这里比较好的方案是先质疑一个核心的假设，然后再按照原文逻辑来搞。

　　9、6分作文标准：

　　A 6 paper presents a cogent, well-articulated critique of the argument and conveys meaning skillfully.

　　A typical paper in this category

　　? clearly identifies important features of the argument and analyzes them insightfully

　　? develops ideas cogently, organizes them logically, and connects them with clear transitions

　　? effectively supports the main points of the critique

　　? demonstrates control of language, including appropriate word choice and sentence variety

　　? demonstrates facility with the conventions of standard written English but may have minor errors范文分析

　　第一篇文章

　　Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after rollerskating accidents indicate the need for more protective equipment. Within this group of people, 75 percent of those who had accidents in streets or parking lots were not wearing any protective clothing or any light-reflecting material . Clearly, these statistics indicate that by investing in high-quality protective gear and reflective equipment, rollerskaters will greatly reduce their risk of being severely injured in an accident.