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评价
This essay provides little evidence of a coherent response to the topic and contains severe and persistent errors in language and sentence structure.
The essay seems to define environment broadly, though vaguely, as the cultural environment. While the idea that environmental problems are fundamentally cultural in origin could be the basis for a promising essay, this response does not coherently develop that idea. Moreover, the writer does not address the issue s claims about international cooperation. Instead the essay jumps from problem to problem without adequately describing those problems. For example, the war on drugs is referred to as a problem, but it is not clear whether it is law enforcement s war on drugs or people s use of drugs that is the issue.
The essay contains numerous errors that interfere with comprehension. These include errors in word usage and grammar . Finally, the essay ends with a closing that is more appropriate for a letter than an essay.
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