The main points discussed are that ?
-- the fall-off in attendance might be industry wide
-- the general state of the economy might have affected movie attendance
-- movie goers rarely trust movie reviewers
Each of these points is developed; together they are presented within the context of a larger idea: that while spending more money on advertising may be helpful, the company should continue to invest in diverse, quality films.
This is a smoothly written, well-developed analysis in which syntactic variety and the excellent use of transitions make for a virtually seamless essay.
This paper clearly merits a score of 6.
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