3. 结构:大 小 大 小
para1:出国的好处
2:furthermore,出国还怎么好
para3:国内考研的坏处
para4:Besides,国内考研还不好
Q:是否可以在para4变为国内工作?
【注意】:分段的Elaboration 需要indicator:specially,furthermore递进conj
段内的elaboration的indicator:in other words
注意区别!
学生的作业:
Para2:
Undoubtedly, gov should take responsibility to subside art within limitation, because this can both promote the development of art of proper value and manipulate some side effect in the arts boom, such as illegal speculation, at the same time. Q:第一句如果是先承认前提就不要within limitation,此时怎么处理?
Furthermore, this support will call up public right attitude to the art
On the other hand, if gov provide whatever as the art industry wants, this will evoke the greed of this industry, thus breaking the social order. In other words,
Besides, unlimited financial aid, such as appropriate and spiritual help, such as , will weaken the investment on other public construction, such as office building, health care, etc.
Q:是否这段太细所以把on the other hand的话说完了呢?
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