怎样写好GMAT作文的开头_GMAT写作

怎样写好GMAT作文的开头

　　可以写

　　The speakers statement is actually a dualclaim. First, the future of our society is determined by how todays childrenare socialized. Second, our educational system fails to shape our children intosomeone who can improve various aspects of the society.

　　第三件事情是陈述自己的观点。这里需要涵盖下文所出现的所有论点。如果某个论点没有被包含在内，那么会给读者surprise，这在学术写作里面是很不好的。当然将全文的观点浓缩在1-2句话里是非常困难的。

　　例如这个题目

　　Educations should find out what students want included in thecurriculum and then offer it to them.

　　观点可以用两句话说明

　　Although personal interests can serve as motivationfor students to learn better , its unreasonable for educators to incorporate all the different interestsin any curriculum. Moreover, educations should shape the interests of students and helpthem acquire useful techniques and knowledge .

　　或者这个题目

　　It is the artist, not the critic, whogives society something of lasting value.

　　观点可以用一句话说明

　　Although I admit that the virtue of the artlies in the work itself , we should not overlook critics role in discovering, evaluating,and disseminating the work of artists and how theyhelp popularize the arts value in the society .