名师指导：对GMAT作文的一些建议_GMAT写作

名师指导：对GMAT作文的一些建议

　　因此：可以是很长的复杂句、套了从句的均可。

　　内容上：

　　如果水平较低：就一来首先扣题

　　B)第二句开始：elaboration这个故事――越生动、形象、具体越好。

　　Eg：学生练习

　　There is only one definition of success-to be able to spend your life in your own way.

　　范文思路：

　　Bill gates是一个成功的IT精英，他用其独特的观看奥运会的方式向世人展示了其成功和与众不同。他在奥运村旁边租了一个空中四合院，然后和妻子一起，看到了开幕式上五星红旗的升起、奥运火炬的传递、跳水健儿夺冠、拳击冠军带伤上场、奥运圣火的熄灭

　　目的：通过这个故事让读者琢磨出这个观点的大致方向来――

　　所以，一定要通过一些indicator体现这个方向：比如一些有感彩的indicator

　　2. answer the question：同意还是不同意。

　　这句话的作用：match读者读了故事之后的预期，同时回答了问题――阐明了我的观点!

　　Eg1:

　　Hunting for a job late last year, lawyer Gant Redmon stumbled across CareerBuilder, a job database on the Internet. He searched it with no success but was attracted by the sites personal search agent. Its an interactive feature that lets visitors key in job criteria such as location, title, and salary, then E-mails them when a matching position is posted in the database. Redmon chose the keywords legal, intellectual property, and Washington, D.C. Three weeks later, he got his first notification of an opening. I struck gold, says Redmon, who E-mailed his resume to the employer and won a position as in-house counsel for a company.