GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文七_GMAT写作

　　equally possible that the ad agency faithfully followed all suggestions from Road Food,

　　and that those suggestions were the cause of the disappointing profits. In this respect,

　　the author unfairly shifts blame from Road Food to the ad agency.

　　Third, the authors comparison between Road Food and Street Eats is less relevant

　　than a comparison between Road Foods own profits prior to its latest ad campaign and

　　its profits during this campaign. Comparing its own profits during these time periods

　　would more accurately reflect the ad agencys effectiveness than comparing profits of

　　two different companies.

　　Finally, the author assumes that the ad agency will be more motivated if its fee is

　　based on Road Food profits. However, the author does not support this claim. In fact,

　　given that Road Foods profits have been lower than expected, it is just as likely that the

　　ad agency would be less motivated by the suggested fee structure than by some other

　　fee structure.

　　In conclusion, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen it, the vice

　　president must provide evidence that the ad campaign caused last years disappointing

　　profits, and must examine and rule out other factors that may have contributed to

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