GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文十三_GMAT写作

　　this region should instead be addressing urban crime problems would be completely

　　undermined.

　　Finally, the author unfairly trivializes the severity of rural crime by simply

　　comparing it with urban crime. While trespassing, vandalism, and fruit-stealing may

　　seem minor peccadilloes, especially compared to violent urban crimes, these rural

　　crimes might nevertheless result in serious financial damage to farm owners, depending

　　on the frequency and extent of the violations. The author fails to provide evidence for

　　the claim that these rural crimes are trivial. Instead, the author attempts to call attention

　　to a more dramatic but potentially irrelevant problem.

　　In conclusion, the argument is weak. It potentially distorts the alternatives

　　available to legislators in the region, as well as deflecting attention from the problem at

　　hand. To better evaluate it, we would need more information about the geographical

　　scope of this legislatures jurisdiction and about the extent of the fruit-stealing problem

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