15. This political advertisement recommends re-electing governor Adams because he
has a proven leadership role in improving the states economy. In support of this reason
the author cites these statistics: in the past year, most state workers wages have gone up;
5,000 new jobs have been created; and six corporations have located in the state.
Another reason offered for re-electing Adams is a recent poll, which indicates that most
respondents believe the state economy would continue to improve if he were re-elected.
Finally, the author claims that rival Zebulon would harm the states economy because he
disagrees with Adams fiscal policies. This argument is fraught with vague,
oversimplified and unwarranted claims.
To begin with, the statistics are intended to support the main claim that the state is
economically better off with Adams as governor. But these statistics are vague and
oversimplified, and thus may distort the states overall economic picture. For example,
state workers pay raises may have been minuscule and may not have kept up with cost
of living or with pay for state workers in other states. Moreover, the 5,000 new jobs may
have been too few to bring state unemployment rates down significantly; at the same
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