claim that this will be the case for all commercial services. Moreover, the authors
recommendation depends upon the assumption that response time to an accident is the
only factor that influences patient care. Other pertinent factors―such as ambulance-
crew proficiency and training, and emergency equipment―are not considered.
In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the
author would have to show that substantial revenue for the town could be raised by
charging service fees for ambulance use. Additionally, the author would have to provide
more evidence to support the claim that commercial ambulance services provide better
patient care than volunteer services.
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