other factors could bring about these same results. For example, the school may have
implemented counseling and training programs that better meet the needs of students
who might otherwise leave school to take jobs. In addition, the school may have
introduced programs to better prepare students for college.
Secondly, the author assumes that the impressive achievements of last years
graduates bear some relation to the introduction of interactive computer instruction at
Nova High. However, no evidence is offered to support this assumption. Lacking
evidence that links the achievements of the recent graduates to the interactive
instruction, it is presumptuous to suggest that the computer instruction was in some way
responsible for the students impressive performance.
In conclusion, the recommendation that Nova High spend a greater portion of
available funds on the purchase of additional computers and adopt interactive computer
instruction throughout the curriculum is ill-founded. To strengthen this recommendation
the author would have to demonstrate that the decline in the dropout rate and the
impressive performance of recent graduates came about as a result of the use of
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