Water are the key minerals for the good health of the residents of Saluda. However, this

　　may not be true. We need not only minerals to keep good heath but also various

　　vitamins. Besides, our body needs more minerals than those contained in Saluda Natural

　　Spring Water.

　　Finally, even if the Saluda water is the major reason why the residents of Saluda

　　are less hospitalized, the argument still omits the fact that there is more than one way to

　　keep drinking water free from bacteria. For instance, the most common practice is to

　　boil water up to 100 degree Celsius and keep it at that degree for more than 5 minutes.

　　Therefore drinking Saluda water to keep good health is not the only alternative.

　　Thus, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the

　　conclusion that the Saluda residents are less hospitalized does little to prove the

　　conclusion-that drinking Saluda Natural Spring Water is a wise investment in good

　　health-since it omits the assumptions I have just raised. The argument might have been

　　strengthened by making it plain that Saluda Natural Spring Water is the major reason

　　why the residents of Saluda are less hospitalized, that the water contains all the major

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