25. The author concludes that City L has good schools, affordable housing, friendly
people, flourishing arts and a safe environment. To support this claim the author cites an
annual survey that ranks cities according to quality of life. Two years ago City L was
listed 14th in this survey. As it stands this argument is unconvincing.
First, the author fails to indicate what individual characteristics of cities were used
as criteria for the ranking. To the extent that the criteria used in the survey were the
same as the features listed by the author in the conclusion, the conclusion would b
warranted. On the other hand, if the survey employed entirely different criteria―for
example, outdoor recreational opportunities or educational achievement levels of adult
residents―then the authors conclusion would be wholly unwarranted.
Secondly, the author provides no indication of how each characteristic was
weighted in the ranking. For example, City L may have far and away the most
flourishing arts scene among the cities surveyed, but it may have poor schools,
unfriendly people, and an unsafe environment. The extent to which the survey
accurately reflects City Ls overall quality of life in this case would depend largely on
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