GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文四五_GMAT写作

　　the relative weight placed on the arts as a factor affecting quality of life.

　　Thirdly, the author fails to indicate how many cities were included in the survey.

　　Th more cities included in the survey, the stronger the argument―and vice versa. For

　　example, if 2,000 cities were surveyed, then City L would rank in the top one percent in

　　terms of quality of life. On the other hand, if only 14 cities were surveyed then City L

　　would rank last.

　　Finally, the authors conclusion depends on the questionable assumption that the

　　conditions listed by the author have remained unchanged in City L since the survey was

　　conducted two years ago. Admittedly, had ten years elapsed the argument would be

　　even weaker. Yet two years is sufficient time for a significant change in the overall

　　economy, the citys fiscal policies, its financial condition, or its political climate. Any of

　　these factors can affect the quality of schools, the extent to which art is flourishing, or

　　the cost of housing.

　　In conclusion, the author does not adequately support the conclusion. To

　　strengthen the argument, the author must show that the criteria used in the survey were

　　the same as the features listed in the conclusion and were weighted in a way that does

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