GMAT作文机经　咖啡店网页_GMAT写作

GMAT作文机经　咖啡店网页

　　V4一个coffee店SEO的argument：公司网页上有收集建议和投诉的栏目，因此所有人都能够clearly response~~;网页地址都写在recipe 上，所以所有人都知道;过去六个月一共得到178投诉和50建议，而卖出去30000杯咖啡，所以说almost all of the customers are satisfied with the products and services.因此：Theres no need to improve the products and services.

　　V5一个Cafe的网站上有feedback page, 他们的receipt上有印feedback page的网址所以顾客应该很容易能找到这个page。而自从有了这个page，只收到了百位数的complaints和十位数的suggestion，而他们已经卖出了300000杯饮料，得出结论，顾客都很满意，不用提高服务和产品的质量。

　　V6 Hot Cup Cafe在一个网站弄了个online feedback。在每个发票反面都有印这个网站的地址，所以顾客做这个feedback不会很困难。在所有30000家他们的cafe分店中，只有173个complaints和58个suggestions，说明他们做的不错，所以theres no need to evaluate and improve their procedure

　　V7六个月了，the hot cup cafe has a website, containing a customer feedback page,然后customers可以submit comments. The website address is clearly printed on the each receipt, so it is not difficult for customer to access the feedback page. 然后呢，那六个月the hot cup cafe卖了300,000cups of coffees，但是customer feedback page最有179个complaints和87个suggestions。然后就说almost all the customers are satisfied with our current products and customer service department, so we dont have make any improvement。