楼主由于昨儿没寂静 吓得凌晨2am才休息,本来就才6小时基本上没睡着。。看这个题目比较晕乎。。。只写了时间上的还有说unemployment rate 关是否适合new business 啥事。很可能一开始unemployment rate就很低,所以即使这个城市其实失业率increase sharply最后还是低于average,但是实际上整个经济已经不好了。而这个城市之所以要招商很可能要么发展到了瓶颈要么已经开始下坡了,所以才要招商。最后建议好歹给一点关于这个城市未来发展预测的数据。
V3 The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional life.
Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new location. Even in the recent recession, Helioss unemployment rate was lower than the regional average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its share of the regions manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.
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In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is the industrial center of the region, providing most of the regions manufacturing jobs and enjoying a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, efforts are currently underway to expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.
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