原句catch up with the pace的搭配是不对的,如果表述和现在世界的快节奏同步可以用keep pace with或catch up with。
4、 Original: Every year, Lenovo spends a large amount of money to product environment without regret. By doing this, Lenovo makes a profit at the same time.
Revised: Every year Lenovo spends a large amount of money on environmental protection while at the same time makes a profit.
原句中动词spend的词组搭配不正确,spend可以表示花费钱或时间。常用的搭配有:spend money on sth./sb.表示在某人或某事上花钱spend time with sb.表示花时间和某人在一起spend timedoing sth. 表示花时间做某事等。另外,原句有些啰嗦,改后稿用while结构省略了一个句子,使句子更加简洁。
5、Original: The advertisement as the news inform us the current technologies of a country.
Revised: The ad informed us of the current technology, solar, available within that country.
让某人得知什么消息或事情,要用inform sb. of sth.,不能直接说inform sb. sth.。
6、Original: I do admire those people who trust their first intuition for their courage to follow what their hearts believe.
Revised: I do admire those people who trust their first impressions, for they have the courage to follow their hearts.
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