To facilitate input by the maximum number of potential purchasers, questionnaires were designed and posted well in advance of the launch of the promotional marketing campaign.
Improved: Before we began advertising, we designed and mailed a marketing survey to find out what customers were looking for.
通过比较,我们可以清楚的明白,上面的句子,使用了一些不必要的词汇,而导致句子看上去繁琐难懂。下面的句子,经过编改,变得简单易懂。
通过上面的几个对比,大家就可以对在SAT写作考试中如何做到形象生动有一个大概的印象了。大家可以在备考自己的SAT写作考试的时候,对此加以适当的参考和借鉴之用。
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