原句中的intend不应用过去分词的形式。
6、Original:They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.
Revised:They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.
focus(聚焦、集中于)此处应该用动名词形式,keep doing一直做某事,keep focusing on。
(五)名词的单复数、冠词的使用
1、Original:a even brighter future
Revised:an even brighter future
even是以元音因素开头的,所以用不定冠词an。
2、Original:I often watch TV with my father when there is a NBA game.
Revised:I often watch TV with my father when there is an NBA game.
字母N是以元音因素(e)开头的,故用不定冠词an。
3、 Original:Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume,better preparing them for the future career.
Revised:Additionally getting a job will enrich their experience and build up their resume,better preparing them for future careers.
原句中是指他们(年轻人)未来的事业,这些人将来会有所不同的事业,故career要变复数;将来的事业此处不是特指,不需要加定冠词the。
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