Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.

　　第三步 充分准备--决定进行catering service---成功 （这是关键段落，点题）

　　具体就是doing marketing research--- 然后data enabled my aunt to reach a final decision--- 决定进行catering service considering its large marketing potential----最后是成功（这里的细节大家可以自己去营造，比如年利润the annual profit increased by 10%, with a market share of in this field）

　　第四步 总结例子，重述观点。

　　Had it not been for the full preparation before my aunts second try, she would not have regained her self confidence and established herself as one of the most successful entrepreneurs in Suzhou.

　　Therefore, from my personal experience, we can draw the conclusion that it is more effective to try after careful arrangements.

　　以上是对于10月份考题的点评。写作没有捷径，只有通过例子的积累，思维的练习和勤加动笔才能获得较好的成绩。预祝考生11月考试顺利。

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