Government is powerful and well-intentioned, but the sordid mechanics of politics often obstruct problem solving. Individuals, however, are not so hampered. In a country where rights not enumerated are for the people, people should see individual action as a right AND responsibility.
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Demonstrating outstanding critical thinking, this essay effectively and insightfully develops a point of view , using clearly appropriate examples from history and current events to support the position. Well organized and clearly focused as it discusses people who were empowered to make changes and solve problems, the response displays clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas . The essay also exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate, and apt vocabulary, and meaningful variety in sentence structure is evident . This essay demonstrates clear and consistent mastery and receives a score of 6.
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