Paragraph structure and development are good. Grammar and usage are, for the most part okay. The infamous voice of YOU is overused. Once in awhile she seems to realize what she is doing, and she will revert to a person or one, but like so many of us, you comes creeping back into the essay.
Overall, this is a good response, and is likely to receive a five from the SAT readers.
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