开头段要素:1.回答问题,2、3 解释为什么是这个答案,4.结构提示,下面举什么例子。
中间段
第一步:指出谁是权威。
In 20 century, white people in the USA discriminated against the black, 1especially in the south. There were signs which said no colored allowed, whites only everywhere. And black people had to sit in the back of the bus.
问题:句子较为松散,并且没有非常明确地点出权威是白人这个概念。
修改:
In the early 1960s of the United States, it is the white who held the ultimate authority in various kinds of affairs, including the policy towards the black, whom they discriminated against. Thats why signs saying no colored allowed, whites only could be spotted almost everywhere. However, as the inferior group, most black people tended to accept the unfavorable status quo until they year of 1955.
第二步:开始营造question 权威的原因和过程。
On December 1st, 1955, it was a common day in Montgomery. Alabama Rosa Parks, who 1was a black woman working hard and did well in her job, took the bus (to go)home and found a seat behind the white section. When the bus stopped at a stop, 6 white people boarded the bus. The bus driver asked those black riders to give their seats for the white passengers as usual. 3 black people stood up immediately, but Rosa refused2. And Rosa refused again when the driver asked her to give up her seat one more time. 3Then the driver called the police. Rosa was arrested by two patrolmen, charged of violating the city bus ordinance.
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