整篇文章综合运用了事例、分析和引用来证明论点,展现了出色的思辨能力。
2 is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas
结构合理,中心明确,思路连贯,衔接自然。
文章采用总-分-总的结构,首段提出论点,中间段用事例证明论点,末段引经据典,总结事例并升华主题。在叙述事例的时候,作者综合运用了 On the other hand, but, thus, since等过渡词,以及过渡句,如第二段开头的 However, there may be those who are not necessarily evil of greedy in their pursuits, but merely do not know how to handle success. 文章在语义衔接上也十分流畅。
全文紧扣论点,不枝不蔓,起承转合十分得体。
3 exhibits skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate, and apt vocabulary
显示运用语言的技巧,词汇丰富、准确、恰当
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