对于影响SAT高分作文句子结构中的冗长的句式,也是很多考生的毛病,在时间紧张的情况下,不少学生写出来的句子没有标点连接,或者只有逗号。
例如:
Current insurance practices are unfair they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
对于这种情况,我们有三种修改方法:
1)标注句号:
Current insurance practices are unfair. They discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
这样,一个独立的句子就变成几个独立的从句。
2)标注分号:
Current insurance practices are unfair; they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
利用分号把具有独立意义的句式分开,但同时向读者表明句子表示的含义之间存在一定联系。
3)利用连词:
Current insurance practices are unfair in that they discriminate against the people who need insurance most.
这也是最有效的修改方法,从句仍然是独立的,同时也表明了从句之间的联系。
在SAT作文中,出现冗长句式还有一个原因,就是误用however、nevertheless、furthermore、likewise、therefore等副词。
例如:
错误:Current insurance practices are discriminatory, furthermore they make insurance too expensive for the poor.
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