第一步:
不做计划---失败
阿姨为人打工多年,小有积蓄---希望自己创业---因为觉得自己厨艺不错,没有进行实地考察,就仓促决定选择餐馆, --- 但是后来发现餐馆没有什么客户---原因是所处的地段是中学附近,竞争对手实力过分强大---可以把对手细化成两类加强真实感,一类是small profit, large sales revenue; 还有一类是good at creating romantic atmosphere, aimed at rich customers--- 之后阿姨不得不关门.
第二部 过渡
阿姨的父亲是个老企业家,他指出问题阿姨这次失败的原因所在, 即要做计划然后再行动---阿姨学习了经验---下定决心重新起航,并且会先做好全面准备工作再决定。
注:通常满分作文都会出现一个智者指出主人公问题的所在而不是由主人公自己讲出。
Despite great disappointment, my optimistic aunt soon recovered from this failure with her fathers encouragement , who pointed out her biggest problem after knowing the whole process. He told my aunt, More haste, less speed. You had better make full preparation before each decision.
Having gained experience from her failure, my aunt tried to restart her business three months later. But this time she gave priority to having a deeper understanding of the demands of the local market.
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