SAT写作分低怎么办？实例讲解SAT作文差在哪儿_SAT写作

SAT写作分低怎么办？实例讲解SAT作文差在哪儿

　　语言修改

　　Tryon Edwards took a firm stand, saying that if you would thoroughly know anything, teach it to others. One who ceases to learn cannot adequately teach. This means that teaching something to another person can help you to learn a subject well. To me, I definitely believe it is true---teaching can make the teacher master a process better--- because I have experienced and read such things in my daily life.

　　本段评点

　　这一段话虽然立刻表明了作者自己的立场，但是内容不饱满，大多叙述是重复和多余的。比如，It means 这一句完全是多余的。Tryon Edwards说的话本来很明白，浅显，不用再解释一遍。或者，可以说自己的那句解释，但是不用引用Tryon Edwards的那句话。

　　学生习作

　　At the age of fifteen, I was a student of senior one. Because I always got high scores in mathematics, physics and English, my class teacher arranged a student who did not get high scores in mathematics, physics and English and she wanted me to help the student improve her grades. After class, she often asked me some questions. I explained them patiently to her. However, when I taught her the lessons, I surprisingly found that I, myself, also had some obscure ideas of some points. In order to make both my deskmate and me clearly, I reviewed my book, went to the teachers office to ask my teacher and put the question to my classmates. Thus, I comprehensively mastered the knowledge and managed to tell it to my deskmate. During my teaching days, not only my deskmate but also I increased the test scores.