SAT作文批改实例：传授知识也有收获_SAT写作

SAT作文批改实例：传授知识也有收获

　　本段评点

　　这一段举了自己帮助后进同学的例子，叙述比较清楚。不过句式比较单调，例如以I做主语的句子比较多。另外，有些意思的表述不够准确、地道。

　　学生习作(第三段) 语言修改 Teaching and learning promote each other is a famous saying by Confucius, the greatest educationist and philosophy in China. The proverb demonstrates that teaching helps others master a subject, as well as make the teacher learn a process. Here is an instance. In Chunqiu Dynasty, Confucius had numerous students. When he was teaching, hisstudents always raised questions . These questions make Confucius to rethink them thoroughly.After he was able to consider them utterly, he told his students how to think of the problems. Therefore, Confucius learnt a lot and wrote it down in his book. Teaching and learning promote each other is a famous saying by Confucius, the greatest educator and philosopher in China. This proverb demonstrates that teaching not only helps others master a subject but benefit the teacher himself. For instance, during the Spring and Autumn period, Confucius had numerous students. While teaching, his students raised many questions which made Confucius rethink them carefully. After he was able to consider them utterly, he told his students how to think of the problems. Confucius probably benefited a lot from these questions and wrote down his thoughts in his book.