另外,SAT写作例子数量的应用是不是也有定数呢?
我们参照SAT官方指南第123页上的满分作文。题目是 Is there always another explanation or another point of view?。作者通过描述一个具体的历史事件1929年10月4日美国股市崩盘引出大萧条The Great Depression所带来的灾难性的影响,和由此所引发的罗斯福FDR改革新政对美国经济的巨大利处来证明自己的观点There is always a however.整篇文章一气呵成,行文老练,丝丝入理,语言精妙建议各位考生仔细研读并学习。
其实除了具体而详细的例子之外,我们也可以用排比句将小而短的例子串起来,形成有气势的论证。比如官方指南第699页的题目:Can success be disastrous?在满分范文中就有这样的一段论证非常漂亮。
Throughout history, we have seen success usedwrongfully in the hands of the unworthy. Powerful leaders of nations, kingdoms,and empires, having succeeded in gaining leadership, have then used theirinfluence wrongfully in achieving their own selfish goals. Nero, the Roman emperor who beat his pregnant wife to death and hasbeen suspected of instigating the great fire of Rome in an attempt to boost hisown political influence; Henry VIII of England, for whom women were beheadedfor not bearing him a son, and who is rumored to have eaten eight chickens anight while English peasants starved; The notorious Ferdinand and Isabella ofSpain, who carried out the Spanish Inquisition The list is endless. Even inliterature, we see the corruption and downfall of society and mankind as awhole as a result of the abuse of success in the possession of those who do notdeserve it, as seen in William Shakespeares tragedy of King Lear. In thestory, societal order is replaced with chaos when there is a power shift fromLear to his evil daughters, Regan and Goneril. This order only returns to aslight degree when virtue returns to England. Success is hazardous when awarded to theunvirtuous.
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