所以整个例子的逻辑链是：曾经的Lance 很顽固，不听任何人的建议后来得了癌症改变自己的性格，变得比较cooperative最后战胜癌症，取得环法冠军。 　　

　　其中对于逻辑链的细节补充很重要，那么怎么知道这些细节呢？这就要大家提前做好对人物素材的整理，以便在考试时选择性使用。 　　

　　4 细节补充 （此处资料取自笔者2010年上半年SAT作文回顾的文章）

　　1） 曾经的性格

　　He was stubborn. He didnt understand the strategy of holding a little energy in reserve.

　　First race: 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan. The race, held on a very hot day, was 115 miles long with a difficult uphill section. Chris wanted Lance to draft--- to stay behind other riders and save some energy for the end of the race. But Lance didnt listen to his coach. He was overconfident and quickly pedaled to a big lead. The lead grew to almost 90 seconds, but Lance was exhausting himself. He got tired and slowed down. His lead fell to a minute, than to 30 seconds. Soon the peloton had caught him. Lance couldnt mount a charge at the end. He could only slide back into the draft and finish eleventh.

　　提示：之前完全不听教练的话。　　

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