例子的题眼是:新环境(政府部门)坚持自己的态度(要致力于保护环境,而不是适应政府部门生活)成功
Carsons mother was a naturalist herself and bequeathed to little Carson a life-long love of nature and the living creatures. Carson was deeply influenced by her mother and was determined to dedicate her life to the cause of studying and protecting the natural world. (营造出主人公的人生态度,人生理想)
After graduating from Johns Hopkins University, Carson was somehow hired by the U.S Bureau of Fisheries and mostly wrote radio scripts for the government. For the next 15 years, she stayed in federal service and worked as a government official. Most people might think of Carson as a typical government official. But unlike most of her fellow officials, who were in fanatic pursuit of high places and positions, Carson never abandoned her childhood goal----to tell people about the beauty of nature. Instead of changing and adapting herself to the typical government environment, she remained the old Carson and never changed herself.(重要点题,即使是在介绍)
During her spare time, she turned her analytical and statistical data into lyric prose: first as an article Undersea,and then a bookUnder the sea-wind.In 1952,she published her prize-winning book The sea around us.At that point of her life, she made up her mind to resign from government service and devote herself to writing.(没有去适应所谓的新环境,而是坚持理想,并且去创造一个更适合自己的环境)
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