2. 微观语言点方面,有些语句稍显啰嗦,比如With plentiful selection options 简化成With plentiful selections 更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多;
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With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities。
Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who dont have much circulating funds. They dont have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, lace of face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain。
It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. Its of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated。
点评:
本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知,因此,考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是,比较特殊的是,题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题,而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以,考生应当审清楚题,在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点,还必须给出相应的缺点。
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